Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 21 April 2020
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Kia ora Kaysha, great work on explaining how to brush your teeth. I like how you have made them clear and we can see what we need to do this.
ReplyDeleteNext time I would like to see you be a bit more specific with your instructions, e.g. how much toothpaste do we use? Do we open the toothpaste lid? Do we spit into a basin?
Hi Kaysha awesome work on explaining how to brush your teeth. I liked that you put to wash your face afterwards. Next time you could maybe use some colour
ReplyDeleteHi Kaysha
ReplyDeleteYour steps are very easy to understand and clear.
I would definitely use your steps to teach others how to brush their teeth.
From Jennah